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- Goozebump0
haaa snizl much better :-) the color i more invitng and the tilted txt makes it stand out and not get so focus on the tank very nice. I get the feel for what ure trying to do with the camo but there is no life, no texture in it. it just seems flat, lifeless,may i suggest like tear in the fabric, coming out and making overlap on the text jsut something to make it less streeful/constrained.
Though great job each revision is making better than the last.