crit/suggestions
crit/suggestions
Out of context: Reply #15
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- tenpointtwo0
dude- white space!
there's just too much going on.choose 1 novelty font and 1 font for the subtex and go with that.
I'm not feelin that retro video game font. there are plenty out there, get one that looks good in print.
That's another thing. Print it out. I'm sure you'll find that your text is a little huge.
besides that, I dig your color palette and I like the feel of the image. Maybe don't take photos when the sun is out so much, though. Wait until the "Magic Hour" then just take a shitload of photos, they'll come out a lot better.