crit/suggestions
crit/suggestions
Out of context: Reply #3
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- Soler0
I like teh "sale" text in 2 and 3, mosdef ditch teh starburst one...
Pay attention to the tangents that the text creat with the image. They should be at the same angles.
Also, you need to create a visual hierarchy in teh text: right now there are 3 competing headlines.
I suggest SALE is big, and teh rest is just subtext