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- piperboytoy0
honestly the typeface PT Banana doesn't go with the layout, with the execption of the shape animations. the scribbles don't go with the boxy layout or anything else.
Perhaps you can make the shape animation morph into the headers?
I would lose the boxes, they seem so restricted and doesn't go with the random scribble nor the scripted type.
the roll overs for the life stylist transform is really bad. like bad css styles.
Honeslty, to make it simple, you should lose the scribble bg, and the top nav bar and intergrate the entire thing into the white box area. it'll make a lot stronger and cleaner look.
You should rethink the typeface choice. It doesn't go with the layout.
Also the shapes animation is nice, but it needs something to make it more interesting. maybe a variation of thickness or something.
Also lose the drop shadow, it looks really amatuerish.
hope this helps. BTW the events photos is creepy. you should rethink that one too Does he really need to be in every section of the site? pick one that looks good and leave him in the about section.