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  • Jesk3150

    I think you are overusing certain accents.

    The gray background in the pages adds more then they are worth. Perhaps try changing the color of each title, align better, white background with your gray bar in between the two columns and you are good. They gray backgrounds are not aligned and it's making me want to align them. They also don't go well with the pages that do not have 2 columns and all white background.

    The picture fade is good on the main page but use something static or change the image on the other pages.

    The whole logo bouncing isn't bad, it just makes me want to click the logo and drag it up some. Is that the whole logo? If so, perhaps you should have it visable somewhere else so people see what you are doing with it.

    The page looks flat aside from the nav background and the shadow. Unless you scroll down you don't realize it's a drop shadow. Choose depth or flat. Or make one more obvious and the other with reason.

    If you can, do something else with the left nav. It looks like you have 2 navs, which you do, and makes it hard to know where you should go vs. someone knows where they want to go.

    It's clean, simple, but looks like a template to me. With so many sites it's hard to move away from that with little to no content. And I don't agree with the white roll over on the nav.

    I know that sounds like a lot but you do have good elements so just try making it more solid.

    Good Luck!

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