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well, i'm going to be honest. brutal even. so take it or leave it:
the colors in the nav have got to go, or pick something much less rgbcmyk
(ie. monochromatic maybe)headline fonts are much too big.
the bold italic callouts need to be finessed, smaller and maybe a different non-italicized font.
the stock image is beyond stock/cliche.
the white type on black def. distracts from the main content.
the red lines with gradient need to be finessed...or removed
the icons are too big.
like i said, brutal but honest. this has taken me a while to type so it may have been said already.