site critique
site critique
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- ivan_cook0
overall if i analyze it, it's fine; but something just doesn't feel quite right. you just have a fraction of a sec to really captivate a viewer at this level, and i feel that something is missing in this regard.
maybe break apart the projects visually a bit more to add distinction between when they start and finish. also if the piece was a real object, show the object (not the digital file). You start off doing this at the top, but with the business cards you show digital files. This tends to obscure the actual work a bit, and adds to my feeling lost contextually.
hope this helps...
good luck :-)