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good design but a bit weak on the typography and i dont mean the anti aliased moving pixel fonts by that, matter of alignment and spacing, maybe different type. The changing color combo is ok but i would apply it different (after checking them all i will go with this as the best one)spazio-a
nice and simple but maybe a problem that's more clear here because of the small amount of content is that all the animation is taking up a lot navigation time by fancy animation, and a few parts don't take in mind that some silly people surf of a 24" widescreen, like the models that just pop awayframes
too much animation slow to navigate, pixel, slab serif, sans serif, maybe a bit more consitency on type and sizesroserouge
not a fan of intro animations, the condensed type is hard to read white on blackoneyear
little to talk about but the style is a bit floating in many directions, maybe it's the 3d and round cornersbio
ok but very plane, the other pages seem to make up for that with flash but that's not required, it's a design issue (and i don't mean adding more elements like gradients or icons) the Home page suffers more than the others, because of the lack of space maybe'unique' consitent style is less important than consistent quality, 'unique' style can limit client interest, not everybody can afford that.
currently the flash skills outdo the design's i'm kinda missing innovation and creativty on both sides but i'm spoiled on that area so the average person will not know this
don't take it too harsh, i spent 5 min trying to give critical feedback because i assumed you would prefer that over praise (at least i do)
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