Resume Critique Deux
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- rflctdsilence
My Resume -- http://tinyurl.com/ycohx4y
Made some changes since the last critique, so please let me know what you think: layout, typography, actual content. Thanks.
- monospaced0
- It doesn't look like he listened at all the first time. Why have a part duex critique.ETM
- frost2150
ur skills section looks like the font is all wacked out..is that on purpose?
- d_rek0
No.
- desmo0
space it out! the first thing i noticed was all the jumbled letters under the skills section. its much to claustrophobic
- rflctdsilence0
Yes. It shows which skills have more experience in.
- hellojeehae0
i dont know. I don't really like the cloud type look. That's all i see on that page
- itstimefortea0
if your not a designer maybe just pay a friend to do it for you or something
- Knuckleberry0
send it to me... I can work on it for you tonight if you'd like.
- ukit0
Blegh. Ugly fonts.
- d_rek0
Reading through the previous thread about your resume i think the best course of action would be to ask a designer to handle your resume.
You already have one offer on the table - I suggest you take them up on it.
- welded0
The tag cloud concept isn't working at all. I think it would make more sense to list them from top to bottom in order from strongest to weakest. It's still really cluttered and underlining the links doesn't make much sense if they aren't clickable. That's why browsers do it. On that note, I don't really think it's worthwhile linking to your own site since there isn't anything there.
Go back to the drawing board or as mentioned, get a designer to help out.
- rflctdsilence0
Thanks anyways. I'm gonna stick with this and if I don't get a job because of the things you guys mentioned I'll let you know.
- I don't think its worth the risk really if some one willing to help you here....rodzilla
- OK. I have to ask. Why the F did you ask for a critique -- TWICE -- when you had no intention of listening?monospaced
- haha what's the point.hellojeehae
- Hombre_Lobo0
What!!?
wtf you lot are replying in a serious tone, this is a joke right?
- duckofrubber0
I would never read this.
- chuparosa0
Just like A/B testing, why don't you take the advice of people here and create another version of your resume done with the help of a designer. Then try sending out the two different versions and see which one gives a better result.....
- quack0
so much shit
fuck a tinyurl too
- Hombre_Lobo0
it would appear it isnt a joke, didnt mean to be rude or elitist.
honestly, that looks messy, no character at all, wouldnt stand out in any way.
http://images.google.co.uk/image…
get inspired.
and dont do this -
" Thanks anyways. I'm gonna stick with this and if I don't get a job because of the things you guys mentioned I'll let you know. "
- rflctdsilence0
For all the people who spoke lets see your resumes to prove that your awesome enough to tell others what's best ;)
- i just looked at mine and it's so much better there's no need to comparequack
- besides it's from 07-08quack
- samemonospaced
- trooperbill0
i have/had 7 different cv's all tailored to different ends...worked for me im earning 2.5 times what i was 3 years ago.
- Me too, but it's easy to get there when working for a serial under-payer. :/welded
- Knuckleberry0
dont mind if I get some criticism.... here yah go....