A film by me
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- eyefeed
Tell me what you think.
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- capsize0
I'll take a six pack
- eyefeed0
Warm or cool?
- Drno0
aahahha
you fuckn hippy
- emecks0
Austrian Beer??
That's like Namibian Chocolate ffs.
- eyefeed0
cmon guys, it is not about beer.
The name of the fitness center is Beer's.
- emecks0
just teasing, Austria was bottom of my list after having to fork out for a vignette to drive 10 km round the Bodensee into Switzerland.
yer film has redeemed your nation slightly though so now Austria comes in just above Denmark.
- chossy0
it's fine, not the most original in the world but it's fine, does the job.
- Crouwel0
hi sjoerd
- stewart0
um, yes.
women + cleaning kitchen = a little stigmatizing no?and there's no need to clean at places that can't be dirty at all.
and it's sssllloooooowwwwwww like thick mud in a funnel.
- stewart0
hi janne
- lvl_130
the noise the mop keeps making is giving me the willies! yuck!
- stewart0
i think it should be a movie that shows all the beautiful men and women exercising in a gym.
it's a lie too, but hey, you want everyone to go to the gym right.
- Crouwel0
what are willies? you got more than one willy?
- Haydesign0
'Willies' means 'the creeps'!
I concur. Didn't like the mop sound but it was a very pro looking advert. Nice work!!
- harlequino0
Haha, nicely done. I would dial down the mop sound a bit, but that's just me. :)
- ethered0
it works
- eyefeed0
haha! That was a nice one.
Well thank you all guys.
Cheers,
eyefeed
- AndyRoss0
You asked, so don't come here all thin-skinned and sensitive...
1) Yeah, the pacing's too slow.
2) Lack of sexual interest = boredom
3) lack of eye contact = audience doesn't bond with character
4) Dress her up a bit, right?
5) Where's the bucket? Ya gotta have a bucket with the mop.
6) Use a sponge mop. Women don't use those huge things in the kitchen any more. Those are for professional custodians.
7) FFS! You don't mop into a corner, you mop away from the corner!!
Otherwise, brilliant.
- leanmean0
Nice and subtle not over the top.
How did you do it After Effects?