A film by me
A film by me
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- AndyRoss0
You asked, so don't come here all thin-skinned and sensitive...
1) Yeah, the pacing's too slow.
2) Lack of sexual interest = boredom
3) lack of eye contact = audience doesn't bond with character
4) Dress her up a bit, right?
5) Where's the bucket? Ya gotta have a bucket with the mop.
6) Use a sponge mop. Women don't use those huge things in the kitchen any more. Those are for professional custodians.
7) FFS! You don't mop into a corner, you mop away from the corner!!
Otherwise, brilliant.