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- mattyd040
whoops, good call nedword, forgot about that. fixing it now.
ender, im definitely gonna look into that.
- _salisae_0
it would be my suggestion then .. if you're going to keep this layout .. that you give the side bar a background color so there is more of a balance
right now my eye wanders around the page when it should be focused on your work
- _salisae_0
also .. your description details work history that isn't shown in your portfolio
and this sentence:
To contact me, please use one of the options seen below.isn't necessary as the contact info is shown clearly .. i'd expound more on the type of work you did for AOL and the rest
to be redundant .. i'd tuck that info away in another spot
- ender790
mattyd, let me know if you find out anything about how bots handle that method.
- designvandal0
Some great work in there
- mattyd040
salisae, thanks for the heads up on the contact thing, that was pretty foolish of me to include that in there.
in terms of the clients, the work i did was mainly comps and i didnt think it would strengthen my portfolio much (tried being selective with what i show), but i wanted potential employers to know that i have worked on big projects, yknow? or is that just something to save for the resume?
- lvl_130
i would definately agree with salisae when it come to that dif. background color to seperate your info from your work!
i actually didn't think of that upon viewing but that is a very good call.
- go_st0
you have a typo, you capatilize [Websites] then switch to lowercase for [logo-design].
your [prev/next] is still jumping up and down from image to image (not everyone, but a few here, a few there). i still think you should either a) move the [prev/next] above the descriptions so they stay in one place, or b) use a frameset and put the [prev/next] below the text a little bit.
otherwise, its a stunner
- mattyd040
go_st, i capitalized the W in 'website' because it started a new sentence. should i capitalize 'logo design' as well?
in regards to the [prev/next] links, what browser/platform are you on? i have it fixed on mac firefox and safari.
thanks again for all the help.
- Monsterpiece0
Nice work. Clean, functional site. Is that a modified MudCorp script you're using? I'm completely in the dark with how to use that. Can you kindly shed any light?
- jaylarson0
thanks for the email encoder ender79! nice!
- go_st0
I got confused since you capped [Graphic Design, Illustration, and Image-making], it seemed logical to cap the other two catagories as well. With that said, if this was mine, I would likely cap Logo-design for consistency.