Crit this dog(shit)?

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  • uan0

    it's kind of too busy, too much messages inside? and also a bit dicky....

    • but I kind of get the dog with sunshades and cook hat in wifi or another kind of radiation environment.uan
    • So shades not ears then? BG details still TBD.5timuli
    • Her friends keep wanting me to add eyes, but it looks pretty fucking weird to me. The hat is intentionally oversized.5timuli
    • Background is too distracting, took me a few seconds to see the dog. You've improved it in your following posts.palimpsest
    • IMO, it does the job very well. Just a flat color for the background disk or a single circle. The tongue (that need to remains) messes with back circle.gonzalle
    • I immediatly saw the trick hat/bone. So I guess everybody doesgonzalle
    • The hat's three line ? why not blue ?gonzalle
  • 5timuli0

    Fuck sake. Clicking on that works for me, but no preview.

    Maybe this works?

    https://ibb.co/Ky3JyLW

  • 5timuli

    My wife runs (well, ran) a pretty successful dog walking and boarding business. Thanks to COVID she's had to shut down, but she had always made client gifts each year by baking dog cookies and other treats. Long story short, the dogs go fucking mental for the shit. She's decided to try it out full time.

    Anyway, I've been in tech design systems for so long (same company for 10 years) that I feel a bit out of touch, so want to get some feedback on a logo proof of concept. It's a play on the original business logo, which was basically a one line 'W'.

    Lots of work still to be done, and this is just the start of a basic logo. Not a particularly original one. But if I don't get feedback I'll just obsess over it and rework it ad nauseam.