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- MikeDubs
Figure I'd have a go at the freelance thing. What do you think of this site? Any tips or advice?
- epilI0
your icons are kinda all type with this 1 image of young girl smiling at you doesnt seem to fit with the rest of the work.
I do not like the grey/ khaki gray colourway as it reminds me of other things that which your works does not talk towards.
i do like when you click on the links in the nav, that it shuffles the work out like playing cards being dealt with a poker style feel.
if you are going to use this feature, why not make the icons shaps more closer to that of a shape of a playing cards? to help solidify the creativity and the vibe.. something like that..
overall i dont feel "Creative Designer" since all i see are bar graphs and numbers.. i get more of a sense of a sales guy or someone who isnt related to any creativite outlet as the one who created the site..
its lacking that extra element a "creative" person would make..
i think you are headed in a positive direction, but i would like to see some other variations..
but dont take my word for it since i am not in your industry..
- epilI0
i do like when window is resized that arrangement of icons gets equally spaced on view for different size screens, the only thing i do not like is the left justification or larger margin on the right side.. i wish it was centered.. as the weight seems too asymmetrical..
- Yeah, I've been trying to fix that for a bit now.MikeDubs
- d_rek0
my first reaction was that I felt overwhelmed...
the thumbnails are almost too telling - meaning they're not so much thumbnails as they are literal fragments of the works themselves. If you could find a way to simplify some of them and have a range of thumbnail styles I think it would help to calm down the landing page quite a bit.
My next piece of advice would be to trim down the folio to only your best pieces. Some of the work at a glance is very similar to the previous/next piece. Maybe trim it down to half of what you have now - give us your best work.
- utopian0
Nice client work, but I was overwhelmed by your stock web template and the loading time was really slow.