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- Projectile0
a bit of fuzzy broken camera distortedness (fuck i cant think what to call it) when the camera falls should be easyish..? just stick a few frames of conpletely random shapes and colour.
maybe some bleeped out swearing? ...but yeah it didnt take me long to realise it was staged. (but then again I am one seriously sharp muthafucker. *puts on shades*)
- fugged0
Nice work mate.
I think the text is cumbersome to read the way it's spread out. It just doesn't flow for me. I'd almost prefer to see it all in once screen, with the exception of the "Isn't it". Maybe it's because I have no short term memory though :)
- +1 .. the gap is too long, they become words, rather than a sentence.lukus_W
- Frosty_spl0
Seems too predictable. Not very funny either.
- 74LEO0
Original: Has a really funny blooper making of video
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- 74LEO0
Is this from a freelance perspective? I mean I know i did some ghetto production in my time to get paid. what was said in a previous post you need to go bigger. maybe a smoke machine electrical failure, fire alarm floor falls out do some after effects stuff. maybe too much power and you open a black hole. i dont know shit like that yaah!
- ceiling_cat0
LOL