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10k Video contest for Jawbone headset. Details here: http://www.jawbonecontest.com/
My video submission:
- e-pill0
high old timer..
- Stugoo0
text isn't on screen for long enough, cuts back and forward i got frustrated...
- e-pill0
can he do background noises with his mouth closed like thru his teef?
- OSFA0
Is that robert Downey Jr?
- FredMcWoozy0
I think the concept needs some work? Stugoo is right, text is to fast.
What if it was more quirky instead of serious? Is this do today?
- irrelevant0
I didn't know about the contest until yesterday, which was also the last day for submissions. I briefly read over the contest and thought of a serious commercial "trailer", but when I was getting ready to post it, I re-read and they were looking for a little humor so I quickly added quirky titles for a little humor. I only had less than 5 hours to shoot and edit, so it was tough. Who knows, but yes the text is a little fast.. but a little too late now. Thanks for feedback
- Thats alright, it will be a good learning experience. Who reads creative briefs anyways?FredMcWoozy
- pr20
the wide shot looks great, the close-up looks not.
next tine you can do the same thing you are doing to the wide shots - various pools of lights here and there - to the CU.