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  • bigtrickagain

    here is an unrequested site crit, because i am killing a bit of time at work before i leave for the week. apologies if it is unwelcome.

    I like your work! You have some very strong portraits in there. It seems like you are at a stage in your career where you are still good at everything and may not have settled on a personal "style" yet - is this true? I see a mix of standard on-white types of portraits, some more interesting studio shots, and more environmental ones. Your environmental ones seem very nuanced and sensitive - like the ones of the painter in his studio - but the best ones are of the kids on black with the studio equipment. They really say something about the subject that the smiling/staring photos on white backgrounds don't. But maybe that is just my personal taste?

    Your nav is a bit frustrating as you have quite a lot of photos but only a narrow strip of thumbnails visible at a time. What would you think about reducing the # of photos in each section (there are many similar ones - girl with red hair at beginning of portrait section seems to have a lot of photos that are alike), and/or increasing the # of thumbs viewable?

    anyway. keep shooting and posting about it here. cheers.

  • Jnr_Madison0

    wut? Link?

  • bigtrickagain0

    http://www.jalanimorgan.com/

    from the public choice