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- benfal99
Iam working on this since 2 days non-stop. Iam becoming crazy. No one saw it yet. Can you give me some feebacks please?
It's not finished yet. I did the music and it's me in the video. There's no story, it's pure experimental stuff, for a school project. Thanks:
- benfal990
by the way, at the beggining iam saying: The aerodynamic is a failure.
I heard a hobo screaming that in the street the other day, was weird.
- ********0
"There's no story" gah There's always a story, yours is just retarded.
- wut?benfal99
- what's your problem dude?benfal99
- i meant to imply that a narrative will always emerge no matter how obscured it may be.********
- and feeling that in this case said narrative is stunted/retarded. perhaps you should consider what you want to show/convey********
- sometimes animation is 'lyrical' .. i.e. it's not defined by a conventional narrative. I think you're just trying to be mean francoisfido********
- Ramanisky20
Not so sure I like the last 20 seconds or so. But I like the feeling of creepiness and a certain sense of dread of the first 2 minutes.
So thumbs up from me- thanks, yeah the last part isn't finished yet. in fact, the whole thing isn't finished.benfal99
- cherub0
the end scene should be cut out.
otherwise, it's interesting, and not retarded. keep working.
- benfal990
good to hear some comments! Iam on that project since friday night. I need a break.
- ********0
you should make a concept.
- airey0
it needs more male sex organ.
- utopian0
more effects like: 1:25-1:26, nice.
- version30
yo benfal99, i'm really happy for your video and imma let it finish but the Show some recent work thread is the best of all time! http://www.qbn.com/topics/535303…