website critique
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- baseline_shift0
i think you could lose those rules in between sections — or at least make them all the same color. and consider losing the little arrowy things on em. even spacing will take care of organization.
i would lose that large grey area with the light logo, and shift some of that intro copy up there.
- Dancer0
Biiiiig and Cramped
- dajaniel0
Take a look here for some better corporate style sites...
- Also see the grid layout styles: http://siteinspire.n…doctor
- applepirate0
looks a lot better.
much easier to parse the total design.
- doctor0
Much better.
I would give the dark boxes a color/contrast that's more different from the background. They don't really stand out in my eyes, and the grey body copy is difficult to read.
Keep up the good work. :)
- seeessess0
My eyes don't know where to look on either designs, too many different font sizes, no clean structure, and the grid?
- planeterror0
12 column grid. Each section is meant to be viewed by itself. you'll know what i mean once the beta is up.
- nikdaum0
It start feeling cramped in the bottom rows, I think mostly to the large size of the headers.
- harmsie0
I think your headers are bit tight, they could use some more letter spacing and more padding.
I think it needs some opening up and then I think you'll have nice little site there, I'm looking forward to seeing it in action with the beta, think the nav will work nicely.