Flyer Crit
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- instil_design
Hey, just looking for a few opinions and crit!
Its for a hardcore event, the client wanted to move away from the standard hardcore blunt glow lights in the background 3d logos stuff etc
- chossy0
you posted this before.....
- i know but not for crit just on the new work post thing, :) sorryinstil_design
- oh and i just looked back it was just the front tooinstil_design
- dont appologise, I was wondering if I had seen it, I would ride that lassie ragged!!!!chossy
- horton0
Sat22Aug2009./10pm-4am
please fix
- ok thanks, thats what im talkin about :) noted!instil_design
- doesnotexist0
be consistent with your use of rounded and non-rounded typefaces. which is it, buddy? rounded or not? I don't know.
- rounded was used on the actual logo, operation hardcore, non rounded was used on the rest of the type on the flyer. that help ? :)instil_design
- ...exactly my point. pick one!doesnotexist
- dont pick one - logo and body copy dont have to matchgentleman
- +1, logo and body do NOT have to match.oblib
- ********0
for the target audience i think it is probably spot on.
- jgrillo0
looks like a trampy event,
prolly a good place to find sluts.- lol want me to get you in for free ;) hahainstil_design
- haha********
- ********0
- ********0
um... dress the model up as a nurse... just sayin'
- lol we got a image ready for the next event with that ;)instil_design
- jay_jay0
MMmmm RIBS!
- Nairn0
fix the shonky shading on your label fold and you're done.
- ********0
Looks like the blonde chick from Heroes.
- Pupsipu0
she needs to pop more, curvolevel her
- ukit0
The dancing bikini chick looks like she was lifted off any about a million of shitty dance compilations.
How about a sexy nurse, since it's *Operation* Hardcore?
Or doctors trying to resuscitate Hardcore after it had a near death experience?
Maybe I'm overthinking this...
- mikotondria30
I believe that you should - and I'm just hazarding an educated guess, based on my years within both the clubbing, dj, music and design worlds, that what you should do is...
..put a donk on it.