Logo crit
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- Ruffian0
Make it bigger.
- shitehawke0
Neither one looks like a logo to me at the moment. If scaled down both would lose an awful lot of detail. I think of the two I prefer the one on the right, without the black outline, more stylisied (and less detailed) and bigger within the green circle.
- Doorman0
Not sure bout the green. Also, Organic goats milk okay...but seeing a goat on the logo says meat more than ice cream to me.
I would say good to use the G2 for sure then G1 cut out of Goat (BACKGROOUND) and spoon and scoops of ice cream (FOREGROUND)
- people need to understand rapidly the link and subject....aaahhh people never understand logosDoorman
- Kidswift0
What about a goat silhouette standing on hills of icecream perhaps a spoon or old school icecream dish to denote its icecream. I like the goat face but don't really think its works as a logo quite yet. Good luck
- chossy0
The one on the right without the black stroke and a little bit of neatening up and repositioning slightly, the one on the left although cute has a fucking spoon in it's mouth nae cunt wants to think about goats and the things they eat yo!.
The one on the right is cute, friendly and makes a nice nod to the contribution of the goat in giving up it's milk so that it's babies starve while you can enjoy your lovely fucking icecream you monsters.
Tell the client exactly what I said.
- hahahahahahahahaha!shitehawke
- Best logo crit I've read in a long long long time.shitehawke
- god, give this man an awardjuhls
- tenfour0
Thanks. The company name is "Greedy Goat" if it makes a difference.
- second goat does not look greedy, more happy and quizzical. Perhaps make him look more greedy?shitehawke
- Kidswift0
- I would listen to this for some inspiration too
- chossy0
I dissagree that making a goat look greedy is a good idea, goats are greedy as fuck anyway, hence the expression 'as greedy as a fucking goat yo!.' The happy cheeky goat is the best idea that way you won't think you will become as big as a house when you eat their heart stoppingly good ice cream.
- Andy_ssw0
look at a goat side on they're quite an iconic shape. Could look good perched up on an icy peak. add some style to the bastard, the two proposed are pretty straight up.
- Kidswift0
Make him a like a fat Godzilla like goat rolling down a hill of ice cream poised to crush a small swiss village - am i kidding am I - tagline the great gready goat is gunning for you! It will be design gold
- Kidswift0
Or you could do a combo of what Andy_saw said and my serious comment above that
- chossy0
Hoi!
Homeboy asked for opinions not creative direction. Meet me on constitution street immediatly so I can beat you all roundly!!!!!!- I shall be there with a sack full of doorknobs and a big stick for poking you.shitehawke
- The 'big stick' is not a euphemism for my penis.shitehawke
- honest.shitehawke
- ha ha sorry I couldn't help myself but just been waiting for the right time toKidswift
- break out the godzilla goatKidswift
- "break out the godzilla goat"
your penis?shitehawke - Heavy heavy sack beatings will be administered soon.chossy
- Oh I love sack races Chossy come down to London so we can raceKidswift
- forcetwelve0
needs to be stylised more - do some cartoon/illustrative research. sports clubs (like football etc) often have great stylised animals etc
- Nairn0
Good God.
- shitehawke0
Going on what f12 and others have said, these guys have some really nice branding, "earthy and natural and honest" kind of thing, plus their illos are great and their pies are fucking tasty.
http://www.pieminister.co.uk/Might be good for inspiration.
- Corvo20
G1 but the spoon needs to be put inside the g mouth and not behind it.
- Kidswift0
have ice cram coming out of its hairy goat udders with little kids lined up to suckle from it..... all out of ideas after that
- neverblink0
- front of viking ships?Andy_ssw
- viking goat icecream! I'll have some of that!neverblink
- I see this thread taking a massive turn now, possibly ending up is psb territory!shitehawke
- eating_tv0
Can't say I like either (at top) the ones from neverblink are much better.
- chossy0
Neverblinks are too aggressive and I don't like the ice creams for eyes. I do like your ignore code though never blink thanks for that.
- haha, you're welcome. I agree they are aggressive: eat my icecream or have two horns in your stomach!neverblink
- ha ha ha..... jesus ouch!!! in the stomach :'(chossy