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- brianbrooks
I've been looking at it too long - need some fresh eyes. Any specific pieces you think aren't working?
Too much? Too little?
Pile it on!
Thanks in advance.
- johndiggity0
nice work, your little blog burst is getting cut off on the right side thought. not sure about mixing folio and neutra for your header. simple site, very clean, nice work. maybe the type is a little larger?
- brianbrooks0
good points - thank you!
- iheartgraphics0
hey brian,
a lot of really nice work. i like your high peak marketing and of course the Portsmouth tea.the format of the website does not give you the opportunity to break your work up.. yes its nice to be able to see everything you do on the same page, but this might also feel a bit overwhelming, one project after another ontop of each other.. this might be a personal preference type of thing, but i really like seeing a project with space around it, enables me to focus on one thing.
also think you should change the "you could of found me" to " you could have found me".. not sure if this is a big deal to you... just something that stood out at me.
all the best,
chris
- coco_ono0
Nice stuff, Brian. I kind of like the blog splash being cut off there...even if not intentional.
How's Louisville treating you, btw? I have a friend who works down there too and he's trying to convince me to move there...but I'm not sure how I feel about the place.
- daveglanz0
Looks great.
Grammatical error on the home page, second paragraph-
"In previous years - you could of found me"should be-
"In previous years - you could have found me"
...I think :-)