T Design Crit
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- dbloc0
definitely like the white better. I feel like the flames might need a little texture..they look a little flat.
- Jordy0
can't see any image in this thread.
- ibye0
The images come up broken for me too, but if you click them they work. I pasted the url, can some one tell me what I'm doing wrong?
- blogger images never post correctly here for some reason.baseline_shift
- sigg0
i like the red and white one but for some reason i see the image as the devil sucking his own dick... is that wrong?
the white paddles are his legs sitting indian style and the white in the middle is his dick.
it's right there guys.
i'm not the only one right?
right?
anyone?
- ibye0
Sigg- Well, its definitely not what I was going for, but I chuckled when I read that.
- I've come to this thread on 3 separate occasions and every single time the photos are already gone :(rodzilla
- I can still see all the images I posted. Like I said they come in as broken, but if you click on them you should be able to see the images. Like I said above I pasted the url into the post, I'm not sure why the image isn't showing up.ibye
- ibye0
Here is the design with some revisions thanks to your input.
The top 2 have more detail + new pinball, the bottom two are the same as the original + new ball.Thanks
PS When I post, it comes up as a broken image, can anyone tell me what I am doing wrong?
- blogspot links no goodinkpink
- new 'horns' are tight. Lookin real good.baseline_shift
- 23kon0
white is def better than the yello for the text
lot easier to read
- monospaced0
eh, I liked the old pinball better
or, make the smaller reflective blob on the new ball smaller and move it to the right a bit (so that it looks like it might be reflecting one of the devil's eyes)
- ibye0
I agree, but everyone, including the the guy i am doing ti for likes yellow.
- I don't mind the yellow. The color palette is reminiscent of old-school t-shirts. You might want to make the yellow paler, though.monospaced
- paler yesdoesnotexist
- ibye0
I am still playing with the color, I will give that a shot monospaced.
- inkpink0
not sure if anyone has suggested this, but i'd overlay (knockout) some distress texture to the graphic. specially on a black tee. always looks better as a finished piece.
- GFY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That NEVER looks good!monospaced - if i only had an ignore button...inkpink
- dude, you are an idiot to suggest him shitting all over his work with an outdated techniquemonospaced
- okdokey. i'll let ibye read your "dude" comments and decide who's an idiot.inkpink
- GFY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- doesnotexist0
maybe have the white part not ink by the sublimation thing that eats the die out of the shirt. so the whole graphic doesn't feel like it's 10 layers of silk-screen on a shirt you know
- monospaced0
fucking ignore inkpink
that fake distressed crap is on par with rubbing holes in your jeans in the 80s to look cool
don't do that to your hard work and nice illustration, please!
- wow i noticed lately you are one agro MF... peace.inkpink
- dude, you're telling this guy to shit all over his work, which makes me pissedmonospaced
- janne760
page one is full of the image loading fail
- attentionspan0
Hm maybe tone down the colours, i like the pinball idea, but colours are killing me, maybe do something about that font aswell, it fits the style but its ultimately a bore.
- ibye0
I'm sorry once again to those you can't see the images, but it seems like the majority can see them. Once again, help a brother out so I can correct this if possible.
inkpink-Thanks for the print lesson and the visual
monospaced- I'm not going to distress it although on some designs I like the look of distressing.
- ibye0
Thanks again for all the great advice on this design, I'm really happy with the final product. Here it is
(to those of you who can't see it, please show me what I am doing wrong when I post, thanks)
- Nice man. this came out good. Like i said up there, the horns on version 2 are a big improvement.baseline_shift
- Thanks!ibye
