portfolio critique
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- identity
It's not in a "web-format" and there is a small PDF to download for it - but I was really curious as to what you guys thought? I already got a great critique from SKT (and currently working on some of the things he had to say) but I wanted to get some feedback.
Thanks guys!
- dbloc0
needs to be web format
- identity0
yeah - I apologize about that guys - I don't really have a head for web, but I wanted to see if there was anything I should leave out/include so when I DO bring it to web it'll be spot on.
- dablammit0
Yeah, create a proper website, but I like your work. I saw the Push Smokey Bones relaunch back in September and liked it a lot, but my god, why'd they go and launch a slow, cumbersome, uninteresting Flash website when the simple one they launched in the Fall was great? Anyway, nice work.
- visionary0
shitshowershave.com is taken?
- Juddly0
Interesting work mate. Some nice concepts. I think the ELS project could maybe be left out, not as strong.
- _salisae_0
i love the grid work of the els project and your overall brand reasoning is inspiring. the type work for the bbq restaurant isn't my favorite. quotient seems to lack the treatment you've given the other identities and looks mostly style driven and i'm wondering how it works small and in context. visiting artists – the excerpts poster cheapens your folio with the trendy type but i love the thinking behind the shared spaces poster. i don't really understand the second page of the spa piece – the jar is kind of ordinary looking without the branding applied.
it would be nice to know what part you took in the development of these pieces as well.
- _salisae_0
also, i'm flabbergasted you are in Florida of all places – looking at your work i'd think you were in the Netherlands or something.
- yes, I agree not the usual FL 'style'OSFA
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amazing work from AMAZING talent coming out of Florida of all placesidentity
- OSFA0
U went to Ringling?
- identity0
yep - class of 07
- OSFA0
And you've been a lurker all this time???
- identity0
hmmm - yes - been "lurking" on here for years :-)
- dirtydesign0
nice work id.
my only comment is that your portfolio opens with a personal statement, but ends so abruptly.
- SoulFly0
pretty cool, the portfolio.
But the "doc" icons on the web page are real cheeesy
- ipissexcellence0
I didn't even open the PDF... fuck that.
- sikma0
Crashed my browser. Probably my fault since I had several tabs going. Regardless you're going to hear lots of that if you use a pdf format.
The couch photos are fantastic, great concept.
- kalkal0
L o v e t h e b a g s s t u f f .
- thank you! a very wonderful collaborative effort with Forest Young: forestyoung.com and Renda Morton: http://renda.store20…identity
- http://renda.store20…identity
- utopian0
nice work, would of rather seen it in a web format
- Agreed. I started to throw up in my mouth while waiting for it to load.Knuckleberry
- haha - totally agreed guys. Any suggestions for a site build for someone who is web-coding-tarded?identity