Logo Crit
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- Spilt-Milk
Creative Sense
Any pointers much appreciated.
- graybu0
Just about reads 'creative', not really getting 'sense'. What the thinking behind it?
- Chimp0
Whats this for?
- brandelec0
didn't catch the C's right away. something sexual about it, don't know why
- Spilt-Milk0
<img src="http://www.creativesuds.com/creativesense2.gif" /> - trying to give it more of an S.
- roundabout0
What it for?
- brandelec0
and what is Cense?
- roundabout0
Does not read very well, at all.
- brandelec0
I though it was Creative Cense
- e-pill0
um... not feeling the bias, the pink squiggle looks slapped on the fonts are boring and i cant read it, it doesnt shout creativity, its like a random word floating in space. try to incorporate some creativity to your huge negative space!!!
- sleepyfatso0
Yeah, I can't get the S in sense. Looks like creative cense, or actually, more like reative ense. Need to rework the legibility.
- benfal990
agree the "S" didnt work...
- Spilt-Milk0
Sorry uploaded wrong one - bit more of an S going on now. Cheers for the pointers.
- roundabout0
I read it as reative ense, but I am a fucking idiot.
- e-pill0
how do you see the "S" in that pink squiggle?
it doesnt read, step back from your work and see what we see.all i see is a squggle.
- yeah think i need to go back and work on this more - too much contrast between the squiggle and the serif font - not gellin'Spilt-Milk
- yes™e-pill
- e-pill0
if you are "creatively" creating your own fonts with the use of the "S" why not push it further and create something stronger for the rest of the verbage, such as a font that can relate to the original shape squiggle "s"
- e-pill0
also the bias doesnt relate to the font or the squiggle.
- what's the bias? I know nothing about logo design ;)Spilt-Milk
- bias means on a diagonal, its actually a fashion term.e-pill
- graybu0
Could you try using a large cap S instead, with the top half of the S made to look like a C. If that makes sense. Might look rubbish like!
- _salisae_0
1. 1982
2. can't read sense