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- BuddhaHat
I made this up last night as a vinyl banner stand for a company sponsoring a local rally event... i'm stuck for content, the text is what they asked for, i'm still umm'ing and ahh'ing about text layout... thoughts anyone?
- airey0
shouldn't the phone and details be at the base? well i'd do that.
plus, needs more cog.
- BuddhaHat0
yeah, it's one of those rollout stands that comes out of the base, so I wanted the image stuff at the bottom to bleed into the bottom of the stand... I thought sticking the contact details in between would look butt fugly.
- fugly is correct sir. still, it's odd that the attention is drawn there instead of a headline.airey
- Amicus0
can you make the logo a bit bigger? I don't think the blue sperm is obvious enough yet.
- airey0
what if you lifted the illustration a tad and carried the pink to the bottom and then reversed the contact dets out of that?
- Jnr_Madison0
Don't like the font.
- Amicus0
sorry. i'll be constructive now.
Message first... call to action second. Also, I'm not sure about the logo being that large and vertical. It's screaming far too loud. IMHO
- BuddhaHat0
hahahaha Amicus, they call it the Commusperm at their work, it's a running joke on a crappy old logo.
I turned it at right angles, and now it at least looks a bit more like a power button... when it's horizontal it looks even more like a sperm just swimming along...
- airey0
i did one. we can all make a sperm / cog pull-up banner!
- airey0
now i'm bored.
- ********0
something is wrong with the text
- ********0
dont put the contact info at the bottom either. They always get lost on those banner stands
- voiceof0
What is the size of this event? There are many times when companies reuse these banners and if they have a small booth or table the banner will be in the background and anything below 3ft won't be read.
- airey0
average shoppin' but i'm having fun.
- ********0
make the logo bigger
- johndiggity0
services are way too small. see if you can cut or condense some of them. maybe try to run them vertically like the logo to maximize the space. as it is right now your type proportions do not look right.