Logo Crit #2
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- WhiteFace
The second version of a logo I was developing a wee while back: http://www.qbn.com/topics/565054…
I'm quite happy with the mark (it's a contempory look at the yorkshire rose) but my typography skills are still a bit sketchy & i'm not happy with the type. Does anyone here have any suggestions, I think the whole thing looks a bit detatched, what are your thoughts?
Thanks...
- epete220
I like it but is it a tree or an ear with ooz spilling out?
- moamoa0
I prefer your last versions.
- doesnotexist0
the type on all of these isn't working yet. what if it was on a circular line following the outer gray stroke?
- doesnotexist0
yes, the other one was better imo.
- WeLoveNoise0
3rd one
but still think your previous batch were alot better - did they not like- they had alot more meaning to it as wellWeLoveNoise
- I really wish they'd chosen the first one & pushed it but they played it safe.WhiteFace
- unlucky mateWeLoveNoise
- digdre0
3 and 4
- WeLoveNoise0
not sure about the "C" in the middle either
infact i look at it and think its something to do with rugby
- OSFA0
older versions for me too.
- chossy0
the type is not working with the graphic.
I have to say I liked the first ones you posted more than this one :(
- ukit0
1rst one, with a little more space above the type. It's kind of a weird logo though, I really can't tell what I'm looking at.
- moamoa0
now, it looks like a postal company to me :(
- WhiteFace0
just to clear this up the old one is history :(
- R-aI0
I much prefered the last set, a real shame the client didn't. But out of this set the last two.
My concern is the scale of the type to the symbol. Scaled down the rose shape will be fine but that text will get damn small.
PS Punch paul ;)
- he he alright matey!! How's things!? *punches Paul. Your dead right about the scale issue.WhiteFace
- Not bad fella, hope you're alright... Getting a little sick of the commute. Due for some beers aren't we?R-aI
- Definitely, any time after friday (payday) are you free next week?WhiteFace
- Wicked will email you...R-aI
- anxiousarms0
why doesn't the logo have anything musical in it? it's for the fucking philharmonic for drying out loud.
- WeLoveNoise0
COME ON whiteface - i dont think you've faught for this hard enough
- WhiteFace0
It's a re-development of their old logo (which is a yorkshire rose), to bring it up-to date.
- digdre0
best are still the previous series though..
- stop saying that ffskelpie
- it's truedigdre
- who gives a fuck? he's said a million times its history - this is a crit, not a lament.kelpie
- cry about it kelpiedoesnotexist