Yet another logo crit
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- Tark0
Janne76!
- Tark0
Did you design your previous logo on your website?
- yeahtenpointtwo
- I really like that logo. Are you just looking to update?Tark
- Yeah, I'm redoing my whole site and I started with a new logo design. Maybe I should just stick with what I got.tenpointtwo
- Vicentvangogh0
I do not know where to begin?
- dbloc0
not really feelin the bird
- Complexfruit0
Lose the bird. I try and read it as one long one word rather than "Ten Point Two". I think you should play around with having a clear distinction between each word.
- imnotadesigner0
all I can say is... wow
- janne760
i love the bird, lose the type
- janne760
i like the black eye on the bird, it seems to imply it is dead.
maybe you should draw a cross there instead.. like an X..
- skser0
I'd loose the type and keep the bird
- moamoa0
is that neutra?
- moamoa0
loose the type, keep the bird
- janne760
put the bird upside down, to emphasize a little more that it is a dead bird.. no type needed.
it will communicate clearly.
- scarabin_net0
lose the bird, remove the type.
make the background bigger.
- moamoa0
bird!
- skser0
and make sure to get rid of this yellow background ...
- Complexfruit0
Hmmm what's with all the piss taking? Did I miss something?
- 3 in the morning and we're just boredskser
- :)skser
- i meant to say first and accidentally said janne76! thinking he was asleep somewhere and then he came alive and now.... this... !Tark
- alive and now this...!Tark
- Ah okay. Don't mind me. Carry on then :DComplexfruit
- ukit0
Just make it "ten point two" in twenty four point Helvetica