Logo Critque
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- gentleman0
the far right mountain is an annoying pixel below all the others
- gentleman0
its about hierarchy and social classes?
so.. whats your statement. at the moment i get hierarchy.. but you;re not telling me anything about your slant. what about hierarchy? your at teh top? at the bottom? in the middle? you love it/hate it? or is it just saying.. "hey look.. some things are more important than others.."
- its a sweeping statement about society sometimes your up sometimes your down,rybo
- brains0
Type is far too light for it's application. Looks like you tracked it in too much, strengthen the wordmark itself before applying it to those shapes.
- dyspl0
....
I was only saying "once in black and white your logo will only looks like montains with Society written inside" and the Society letters are so thin than the black will completely loose them.
- Privat0
more bolddd
- waterhouse0
welcome back, rybo
- brains0
I would probably totally ditch the mountains to be honest. maybe as a secondary element somehow used, but I wouldn't incorporate it with the wordmark.
- doesnotexist0
read Ulysses speech on 'degree,' perhaps that will give you some inspiration. with such a sophisticated idea you're dealing with, perhaps your symbol should be sophisticated as well, now it seems very pedestrian.
- dbloc0
needs more snowboarding.
- Amicus0
meffid... you there? give me a call. I have next week of work.
- uncle_helv0
Why complicate things?, when a logo needs explaining for someone to understand then it's already a faliure, non?
What about just finding a nice typeface that can convey the message easier, or even a new font every time you refresh the site or change pages, a font that has a feeling of lower/middle/upper classes?!
Like this...
http://typographica.org/
- embarko0
I agree the font needs to be stronger.