portfolio review
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- JerseyRaindog0
I like the structure Edvin - good approach to whole one page folio thing. I do think there maybe too much work in there though. Sometimes less is more yaddah yaddah yaddah...
- fodcj0
Some good work. Especially like the Nice site design and the pin badges image :)
- rybo0
the web stuff is great maybe the logos are too small make them bigger?
- ian0
I like the work, some good stuff in there. I would consider changing the identites section though, looks like you've added your own identity to pad it out, put another one in there to show some range.
The links to the active sites are very subtle, took me ages to realise that you could click through to them, perhaps make the images link to the sites too, I tried clicking on them several times and thought maybe it was all just concept work or unfinished until I saw the wee red link.
Also, you start with a list of companies rather than work, perhaps move it or link up the company name with work you've done for them so when you click it brings you to the relevant work?
All minor quibbles mind, so feel free to tell me to bugger off.
- thanks for your suggestion. i'll probably link the work to the site. and put the client names on the work as well. those are small easy fixes, it'll do for now until i have time to redo the entire thing. thanks againpiperboytoy
- piperboytoy0
thanks leigh. yeah i might add a javascript to show a bigger screen.
- Leigh0
i think some projects could be presented little better... for example Nokia experience center, it's all a bit too small to see maybe show just one or two larger screens?.
Overall though a good solid mixture of work.
- do you not have a better image of CANADAGOES WILD ??
Leigh - yeah it links to the site. but the link is a tiny txt link. i will probably like with the image. thankspiperboytoy
- do you not have a better image of CANADAGOES WILD ??
- piperboytoy0
thanks. I usually put my illustrations on my other site. http://www.piperboy.com. i think I might just take the illustrations out and put only web related stuff there.
I am going to redo this eventually but still keeping the one page thing and i will try to separate the work with a nav. thanks for your feedback- that's right, I thought you had another site..neue75_bold
- yeah i need to change that too. kind of oldpiperboytoy
- neue75_bold0
love the overall structure.. the top of the page is beautiful, nice type, grid, etc.. the work is not totally my thing, but it is well done.. Agree that it might be too much..
what about having a nav that gives you the ability to only show either 'web' 'identity' or 'illustration' at one time?
- piperboytoy0
sorry i was getting ready for bed. :(
i wonder if i should take out stuff? i like my old work more but trying to show newer work.
- mistermik0
haha yeah - too eager.
some nice bits.
- Leigh0
gimme a sec, only just got into work.
- piperboytoy0
anyone?
- piperboytoy
Hi, was updating some work. i have work from 2004 - 08. not sure if it's too much. I've been staring at this for 3 days and not sure if i like anything. Let me know. any feedback will be welcomed.
thanks