orrible poetry critique plz
orrible poetry critique plz
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- vcr
"As beautiful as a freeze dried rattle snake being gently and lovingly inserted with dead swollen mice by its geriatric deformed owner.
As sweet as the owner smearing his belly with his own shit while licking the anus of the snake."got loads more, and thoughts ?, just shite probably..
- JerseyRaindog0
That's worse than Vogon poetry.