motion graphics feedback
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- Esco1782
Looking for some feedback on a motion graphics personal project I did. Any tips or pointers is much appreciated, especially with compositing and camera work. I'm definitely going to fix the sound (I think you will agree that fading out the music is a bit lame). Anyways, thanks in advance for any tips/pointers. :)
- chossy0
Nothing wrong with it well done :) keep up the good work.
- fyoucher10
a lil' too chaotic for my liking. maybe slim down on the stars that fly out.
- Meeklo0
animation wise, looks great. good timing and good camera movements.
Design wise, I'm not sure.. burton has really good desing. Not saying that this was bad, I just think might not reach their bar.
Just my opinion
- locustsloth0
wicked! Looks great
- Mishga0
Like the way it started, and the ending...i think you should try working with the z axis and give more punch to the middle part
Great animation skills btw...Keep working!
Cheers!=)And Mia_Free said:
"It's quite good, but you need more animated action elements on the dead times.."
- fbuddha0
many nice touches but i would work on the end. dont see the benefit of zooming out to show the entire comp, its too busy at that point to get any meaningful info and throws off the pacing because it stops on the arrow bounce, then needs to pick up momentum again to form the logo. should be simpler.
- Esco17820
thanks for all the feedback guys. i agree with some of the speed-momentum issues. i really want to make it feel seamless and smooth but im having a tough time bringing it all to a close.
- Ramanisky20
you did really good there .. I liked it a lot
- Barry_Grant0
I've never been to Tokyo yet, but something tells me I will love it .... shit wrong thread
- NONEIS0
Looks pretty good, I would try and add some more depth if possible, and perhaps some more movement once each rider resolves. It feels like it primarily moves along the x-axis, but your other 3D movements are far more compelling, see if you can match that with the rider transitions.
- jshaw30
legit yo good work!
- Samush0
yeh really nice work, impressed. i want skills like yours!
- Esco17820
thanks! i want skills like psyop and shilo!
- robotron3k0
haute!
- wordsinyourmouth0
dugg it man, sweet job
- dog_opus0
You do great work – I checked out all three that you have up. Didn't like the music for the Kobe piece, though.
- utopian10
nice work, but please kill the rap music does not evoke the brand, style or nature of Burton or snowboarding in general and certainly does not compliment your grundy raw style of motion & animation!