One more logo crit
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- iCanHasQBN0
ATTN: Tark,
I think you should give them an .ai file.
- Tark0
I know this thread is older but did you end up delivering the .AI to your client or just an eps or pdf? I got my first logo design for a client and wasn't sure if I should keep all the files or just be generous and give it all to them so they can use it for different collateral. I think they will end up wanting a lot more work out of it so I was thinking of not making a big deal about it anticipating other jobs from it.
- 23kon0
I agree with epete. Keep the strawbs as they will make peoples
mouths water - even a stylized illustraton. Even if you don't use it in the logo keep it as part of the identity
- arseni0
Ouh shit. The font is horrible. The mark does not go with the font and it's unclear what it is. Start over. Make it tasty and sweet.
- epete220
The chocolate dipped strawberry is visually delicous, you should stick with it in my opinion
- ninjasavant0
Thanks so much everyone, you guys humble me with your design chops. Its been a while since I did a straight up identity project. The second logo is the current one that she hates that I'm trying to replace and most every company like this uses the chocolate dipped strawberry so I'm trying to avoid that metaphor.
But you've all given me a ton of things to consider and I will head back to the lab with the shape and font. Thanks again to everyone! You're all better than rock star designers, you're recording industry exec designers.
- 23kon0
i really like the concept of the second one, the treatment of the text with the outline and a delicious image of the strawb n chocolate.
with the text, what about a more french looking font. something like this ... http://www.flickr.com/photos/mul…
in fact id rip that completely.
but do the text like you have in the 2nd logo - it would give it a more "dunkin donuts" friendly feel.
and id make the illustration of the strawbs bigger - again ... think "dunkin donuts" in the styling of the illustration.
could be a winner!
- akrokdesign0
see above, nice idea.
font wise, you need to expend your view.
color wise also, better if you got pink and brown, not red.- agree
something like this.
http://logopond.com/…BannedKappa
- agree
- Complexfruit0
- < way better, waaaaaay.akrokdesign
- agreearseni
- +1
BannedKappa
- robotron3k0
Huh La La?
- invisiblechamber0
ouhlalaitsacamera
- jevad0
Needs more refinement. Try some classier looking typefaces - that one is way too heavy....
- matt310
you might want to have the sumo's feet bleed off the edge of the circle - then it might not look so much like a person. The serif font looks way better than the script as well. I might experiment with some other sans-serif options though. maybe engel light or officina - another serif that might work nice is caslon.
- kld0
the logo make more sense with wedding cakes but I will alway see the sumo and now cockroaches ;)
- 5timuli0
Logo looks like a cockroach standing on it's hind legs?
- kld0
Ooh is better
- utopian10
- I may owe you a beer.ninjasavant
- Better, but I still think the symbol is too confusingukit
- 1. Lucy Script, 2. Baskerville, 3. Paralucentutopian1
- nice job! better.Jaline
- The symbol grew on me, yes at first I thought "sumo" then "choc fountain" sank in...utopian1
- by the way, what does "ouh" mean?Jaline
- It supposed to be a chocolate fountain combined with a wedding cake since thats what she does the most ofninjasavant
- Jaline, I don't know. Its just what she called it.ninjasavant
- you can't polish a turdmonospaced
- epete220
Repeat
Fatal Error: Those are horrible, Start over.
- epete220
those are horrible