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- omgitsacamera0
1 and 3L
great work
- monkeyshine0
two bottom right are nice...solid color has a slight preference for me. The bottom right look like they are broken down...not very gogo at all.
- nicnichols0
left side, 2nd from bottom for me.. like that its one unit, as opposed to breaks in the type areas.. also like the simple caravan logo as well..
- chossy0
the second bottom one on the left, get rid of the triangle windows and make the wheels round.
- detritus0
I'm not feeling any of them, I'm afraid. I don't get the caravan windows and think there's not enough focus on 'GoGo'. The angled ones at the bottom don't make any sense at all - why the angle?
If I had to pick, I'd suggest #2 as being the best route to follow.
- Actually, scratch #2, I regret saying that. #3, maybe.detritus
- Llyod0
these are actually pretty good. much better than most of the shit on here.
- VectorMasked0
2nd down from left side.
the same one below that one has an unnecessary 2.0 glass effect.
- digdre0
Thanks all for the comments, i'm still not sure on the colour of it.
But I also like the 3rd one the most (without the angle)The window thing is:
* Sunbeams - sun/camping
* flowers - caming/nature
* (attention - place to be/here you need to go)The weel is oval because imo this gives the 'go' effect, more dynamic as it with a round wheel.
- speaking of colours... I prefer the lighter green. It has more impact and is a bit 'happier'.VectorMasked
- you sure I should go with green?
digdre - no i'm not
:oP
but out of those 2 greens the lighter one is better.VectorMasked
- digdre0
Not sure if I should go with green. or orange orso
- digdre0
Client likes
1ste one
and
3rd one.gonna do some colour variations and start on webdesign tomorrow.
More comments are welcome for improvements
- _salisae_0
if it were my project i'd look into making the o in the wheel and the counter space of the g and o look similar .. for graphic coherence. your font choice is uninspiring.
- but..But... univers! :p
thanks for comment, i'll look around for some fontsdigdre - yes, make "O" s similaralicetheblue
- but..But... univers! :p
- kld0
the sunbeams are really distracting me
- max_prophet0
It says 'caravans' in the company name, do you really need to back it up with a caravan icon? Also - the sun-ray window things really don't work.
If I was handed this to dom something with, I'd probably mirror the caravana and adjust its diagonal edge so it matched with the diagonal of the italicised type you are using, and then tuck it in to the end of the word 'caravans' - maybe the trailer hook thing can adjoin the letter S?
I'd be questioning whether it was correct to make 'caravans' bold and whether go go works better in Caps.
Needs a fair amount of tweaking and the type is very tacky, you have one very basic laymans idea here currently.
- digdre0
Thanks for the tips, really appreciated! although i chose to put the caravan in that way because it looks 'positive' now, you read from left to right, so I placed the caravan in that way too.
(if this is totally not done/bad , please say so.)About the GOGO instead of gogo, good idea actually, but i'll have a look into some other fonts first.
And I did the caravan icon because it could be used without the text aswell and people would still know what the site,... is about.
- But feel free to correct me on these points..
I really appreciate all of your comments.digdre
- But feel free to correct me on these points..
- kld0
this is probably lame but what if the trailer was flipped horz and was towed by the logotype
- I think I agree - feels kind of wrong that the van is being "pushed" rather than "pulled"thismanslife
- good! i'll do that tomorrowdigdre
- thats what I meant, my explanation sucked I guessmax_prophet
- i see i see, maybe i just misunderstooddigdre
- I also agree about maybe having the van skewed at the same angle as the italicized typethismanslife
- +1 that's what i feel as well_niko
- dbloc0
I like the Go Go on the first one. maybe try to work that into #3 to see what it looks like. It grabs more attention with the varying sizes.
I also like the previous comment about flipping the trailer to give the impression that the logo is pulling it.
- max_prophet0
nope