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- desmo
thoughts???
- TheBlueOne0
Nice. But the sidebar is too wide...IMHO
- Also..something just doesn't balance right on the vertical flow...TheBlueOne
- I think the bars are too close to the same width, not enough difference to create a visual hierarchy.lherb
- Sorry, "bars" meant vertical text areas. Have bars on the mind as I'm off to one.lherb
- 7340
you got a case of the sprouts
other than that i would take the odd white halo off the logo with the cow, also lose the daisy on the right side of the header.
and id work on the footer a bit.other wise i like it, nice colors and it has some potential
- VectorMasked0
yep. what TBO said. The ad basically looks like the main thing on the page. Kinda like it's an ad with a webpage around it.
The footer looks kinda bad and unfinished. it doesn't blend in with the rest of the page.
Huge waste of space at the top. and btw, the bg took a while to load.
And go a little easier with the reflection on "blinktoronto.com"
- TheBlueOne0
And why two headers? You have the blink logo in the header and then right again below it with the cow and the skull girl....
- note my note about the sprout734
- Sprouts!! I Fucking hate sprouts!!!TheBlueOne
- VectorMasked0
fix the linespacing too. the text is a bit tight.
and why is there a white 1px line on the right side of th main banner?
- VectorMasked0
and in the footer, please credit us for the design
;o)
- desmo0
its a work in progress still. nothing final at all
thanks all
- post it again when you get it up734
- get it up?
http://www.viagra.co…
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- ukit0
yeah, just kill the background. it's clip art happy, and the colors don't really match the rest of the design.
- heavyt0
reminds me of
http://www.ndesign-studio.com/
- graham0
now theres a 200k bg image i didnt want to see
- ldww0
Oi. There is way too much going on there. Tone it down dude.
- Llyod0
not busy enough
- VectorMasked0
<client>Make it more sexy. You know, like, more funky. I want people to go like "whoa! that's sweet".</client>
- <client>Funky...You know, like hip...Gosh why do we even hire these designers...</client>wendog
- utopian0
Looks alot like so many other websites out there, its shaping up nice though. Also, please remove the "Apple Style" reflection/drop shadow effect on "BLINK TORONTO.COM" this is really tired looking and played out.
- wendog0
wow - i am not feeling the purple at all...Need to tone it down
- jevad0
mate - you need to have the main content centered structurally in teh browser. I am running 1024 on my ibook here - and because of your crazy 150px margins top and left - I actually have to scroll to even see the main menu. Not cool.