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- Mojo
Hello chums, I have just finished (as of 4am!) a new track, title 'Remembrance', that I've been composing in midi, and would like to give you a listen.
It's hard to define what style it is, I'm hoping you could help - but please listen all the way through as it is progressive.
Ah. So glad the bulk of it is done... all I need now is a band.. hah
http://x.replete.nu/Manifest_Rem…
First of all, it will sound electronic, because it's all programmed in midi (mainly for compositional purposes), and the mix isn't quite right either .. but i'm not too bothered as this is a go-between for recording with real instruments.. after some work.
In terms of style, erm, I've tried to be original and it's come out as a weird metal-esq style with indie elements. There's a bit of shreddery just after the middle.
It's progressive, so please listen to all of it.. I guess i'm just interested to what people think of it as i've been locked in the attic for 3 nights going to bed at 4am...
Oh, it's full of stupid clicks and hisses because my motherboard has a weird bug.. so it's a bad copy.. anyway, listen and tell me what you think!
Also, this is the first part of the 'song', it's the first movement of a progressive piece called Remembrance, I think the final is like 14mins long (it's not repetitive either)
- Mojo0
..Also it has some low bass, so please use nice headphones / speakers :)
- Poochie0
Good stuff. Obviously needs a real band.
Very like Tool. Which is never a bad thing.
- Mojo0
I don't even listen to tool :S I'll check em out sometime...
- Mojo0
Where's a good place for getting crit on music?
- http://www.futurepro…rabbit
- aha, thank you.Mojo
- erm wait, no it's all rap!Mojo
- ********0
Not my style - but the theme is well structured and all "lines" are well developed in my opinion. It's also well balanced without too long "parts" and "choruses". Technically and emotionally is a v nice and solid piece - i liked it.
- coalson0
Hmm... kind of sounds like Peter Frampton meets a Tool cover band.
When you play live are you going to play through that hose? j/k
- Mojo0
Haha, yeah well the guitar sounds aren't the best - I'm using GuitarPro, which is just a tablature editing tool! Quite limited..
Never heard of Peter frampton unfortunately, but I checked him out on the tube, and some nice stuff.. and a cover of black hole sun :)