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- trooper
Ive been given a whopping 2 whole days to design a corporate website selling some hardware... and ive had to write most of it myself :(
at this stage ive got around 1/2 a day left to add in more spot graphics and the product imagery (when they supply it) so verdicts please
http://neue.co.uk/alpha/default.…
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- menos0
looks good to me (especially for 2 days) but i ain't no expert on the matter.
- trooper0
im getting different responses from people with different monitors. ive got a huey calibrating my dual tft and crt setup so it looks standard here... i noticed that when showing it people.
- Drno0
i like it, suits the role,
but i would cancel the mirror effect on the top menu and go for a full color (ex: white) background,except that it looks nice
- 7340
i dont like the logo but i dont suppose theres much you can do about that...
other than that i think you did brilliantly for only taking 1.5 days
good job!
- trooper0
a question i have is on the home page below the big banner theres a device that makes it easy to identify which product matches your needs by 2 factors... is this easy enough to understand and would you click on it?
- Mojo0
the columns of text feel long and dragged out (text-heavy), perhaps add some background to one of them, or seperate, with some more graphic
pretty good though
- johnnnnyh0
looks good to me, here. specially for a day and half's work.
- Wolfboy0
Good work for such a fast turn around - don't you love a tight deadline?
The one thing that jumped out at me as soon as I looked at it was the angle of the faint lines in the red '14 day trial' banner. I think it jars on the eye a bit because it's a different angel from the background.
My other suggestion would be some kind of roll over on the buttons along the top as it is hard to know when you have left one button and got to the next as they are so close the cursor is always a 'finger pointer'
how's that?
- bolus0
loose the mirror effect in the menu, the rest is fine..... may be the background raster could be a bit more subtle (sp?) thinner lines perhaps....
good luck
- menos0
just a question. why do you have some boxes with rounded corners and other with straight corners? (on the right hand side of the site, 'latest news/test your bandwidth)
- Wolfboy0
on the '14 day trial' thing, create a new version for the pages after the home page - there is the corner of the product visible on it.
- billl0
what wolfboy said
- kerus0
there's a little bit of "what do i look at first" chaos going on but not bad at all for a quick project
- Stugoo0
yeah the white corner looks like it should follow the curve of the red as oppose to being a corner?
- jevad0
Reflection on the menu type looks shite - kill it.