Logo crit.
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- jmont
These are for an event designer/florist. I came up with some suggestions on how to simplify their logo.
Any opinions welcome.Their current logo:
Ideas 1:
Ideas 2:
- TR-8080
I prefer the original.
- jmont0
The original is good. It just becomes distorted when shrunk down.
- Jaline0
Something from the logo 1 selection.
- detritus0
I'm confused - the original doesn't look like a logo and your re-dos don't bear any resemblance to the original?
What's it for? If it's a business, I don't think your efforts are very logo-like - they're all treading weird line between being far too complex and not very expressive.
If I were re-doing that logo, I'd take note of the abstract floral lines in the original and build around them - frankly, your 2-d flowers look messy and a bit amateur.
Sorry :(
- detritus0
Oops.. it's for a 'event designer/florist'. I'm blind.
Not trying to be a cock, but the above business-type demands a relatively 'classy' logo, which I think could be better achieved with using a flower form more along the lines of the original, along with a slightly less futuristic font.
Do you have free rein to do what you please? Have you explored any other forms beyond a pink flowerhead that perhaps describe 'seed', 'florist' and 'events' a bit more acutely?
- jmont0
The original is too intricate to use at any size smaller than what's shown and doesn't look like a logo at all, which is why I tried simplifying it.
I can see my versions may be too complex for a logo.
Thanks for the abstract suggestion-
I'll keep that in mind for another revision.
- jmont0
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Oops.. it's for a 'event designer/florist'. I'm blind.Not trying to be a cock, but the above business-type demands a relatively 'classy' logo, which I think could be better achieved with using a flower form more along the lines of the original, along with a slightly less futuristic font.
Do you have free rein to do what you please? Have you explored any other forms beyond a pink flowerhead that perhaps describe 'seed', 'florist' and 'events' a bit more acutely?
detritus
(Oct 30 07, 14:20)They really want to keep the concept of using a pink flower, specifically a peony.
My samples didn't use a peony so that will have to be changed anyway.
But something classier I think is the right idea. Thanks.
- doesnotexist0
their current one is better than the two you made. they both look the same and dont desire much from the viewer.
Their original is beautiful, I would try to simplify that down so it does work at smaller sizes.