Microsite feedback, plz
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- hardface_00
hey guys!
I'm working on this microsite for a booking management agency:It's the pitch. What do you think? I'm not sure with the typos combination... Locator+Carlson...
Thanxxxx!!!
- Mishga0
Like it!
Clean as i like...the upper left logo seems blurry...Nice portfolio...
Está de puta madre...=D
- emecks0
Like it too.
Only thing I would look at is the copy... some spelling / grammar issues there.
- hardface_000
Thanx!
The copywritter is disappeared! hehehe The logo is dummy, I'll work on it, and I'll work in a mp3 player, important for they, they sells sound... thanx!
- hardface_000
Kill the copywritter.
- Nairn0
"Booking is our business. Music, our life" / "Bookings are our business. Music is our life"
Nice job - it's nice'n'clean as someone's already said - I particularly like the way the clouds cut in on the homepage - I wouldn't expect that to work on black.
My only quibble - the font choice used (although otherwise great) leads to problems with 'YouPlayIPlay' when in the body text - it kind of looks like YouPlay1Play or YouPlay|Play.
The graphic equaliser animation is possibly a little too frenetic / short a loop. It'd be nice if you could get it to stop when you're caching new songs too.
Me likee!
- hardface_000
Thanx so much Nairm! Is the same forever, we wants a design and we don't have nothing... I'll doing a character or a icon down for change the click on the logo, I like the idea of click in character or a icon and down random quotes or graphics.
- neue75_bold0
it seems to be a bit disjointed. I kinda like what's going on overall, but the typeface you're using seems so far away from that logo [which I don't like] the rollovers don't seem to suit the typography either [the red to transparent gradient]... The type seems a bit too big [nav could be half the point size] at least in relation to the logo which kinda falls away and gets lost...
but overall it's 'almost' there, just look to resolve the lack of hierarchy and balance the two different styles a bit more..
;)
- contra0
Looking good, but here are a few ideas...
I don't think you need Carlson (?) for the body text, try sticking with Locator and developing a better hierarchy of weight/size combinations. Carlson looks too fat next to to it.
The red/orange rollover colour clashes with the blue.
Make the logo bigger! ;)
Seriously, it looks a bit of an afterthought at the moment and it's size doesn't balance well with the rest of the elements on the page.Not sure about the 2 pixel fonts, choose one and use bold/regular or uppercase/lowercase to differentiate content types.
Hope that helps!
- hardface_000
Thanx so much guys! I'm learning today! Yes I thinl is a uncontrolated the size/weight. Work in progress... And Locator for body copy I m not sure... What type for body copy works with Locator?
Thanx so much, sorry for my english :)