Logo crit-ish
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- Jaline0
very generic.
but I guess if your client likes it...
- OSFA0
Jaline, you hurt me...
- spendogg0
i think it is good - nice kearning.
- joyride0
is that crown flipping me the bird?
- Jaline0
is that crown flipping me the bird?
joyride
(Aug 23 07, 07:27)ignore what I said before. This is the perfect logo.
- kelpie0
type nice crown bad.
- tank0
type is good,
i'm actualy working on similar ;)
crown is gonna give u alot of headache in applications of the logo...
- OSFA0
much better Jaline... ;)
thanks guys, So the type shouldn't be touched?
What can I do with the crown? Maybe to the side?
- Nairn0
I agree with the others - text is gorgeous though you might have problems long-term if you have to apply that crown to Very Small Things.
Unless you're putting it on itty-bitty knick-knacks or resigning it to a 30px wide space on-screen, it'll probably not matter.
So, er.. why don't you like it?
- 4cY0
refine the crown, try it smaller. more defined. now it seems rather heavy on top of the type. too prominent. also, have you tried looking at it with different color combo's?
can't the type be not black, for instance? that does indeed make it slightly generic..
- 4cY0
also be wary of the finer qualities of the type when rendered at small sizes, think web.
- gramme0
ditch the dots. Use curvy shapes for the crown that compliment your word-mark.
- ethered0
The graphic is better than the type, but it works.
I like the circles.
- k0na_an0k0
that text is shit hot. nice kerning too.
the crown needs work though cause it's just not up to par with that beautiful type treatment.
google crowns for ideas maybe?
*googles boobs
10 min later
*googles crowns
- 4cY0
- Jaline0
yeah, the subtle, pretty details of the text may also be lost when you make it smaller. hopefully not.
- 4cY0
i posted the KLM logo for you to show how it can look more balanced with the type..
- OSFA0
thanks guys!
All the comments are very helpful. I'll work on teh crown...
I'm playing with color, and crown now. I don't think the type would suffer that much, but I am testing...
Does this look better than the black?
- linearch0
don't mean to be an ass....i like the way it looks visually.....but, why a crown with the word magenta for cheap women's clothes?
- Nairn0
How will the dots and the letter tails look on a wee embroidered label?