Logo crit
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- era4O4
Just wondering what you guys think of this:
http://don.citarella.net/index.p…
I expect to get a lot of comments from people that say it vaguely reminds them of some other bird logo. If there's truly something that's really close, please let me know. Otherwise, skip that part of the critique. :)
- marychain0
Not bad really. I like.
Maybe connecting the wing and the tail feathers in some way so it doesn't look as if it's having a poo.
- Abominable0
The top of the bird appears to be too big for the body, imho. Also the profile reminds me a liittle too much of USPS. changing the head slighly would remove that.
Nice start.
- OSFA0
Nice, but I was going to mention the USPS also. The head and the way it is displayed reminded me of it.
- gramme0
three in from the very bottom right.
Fatten up that top feather a bit and fine-tune your curves, a couple of them appear a bit wobbly to my eye.
For your logotype, I'd move the icon upward a bit, right now it feels a little claustrophobic.
Nice work.
- robotron3k0
it's very nice work, but when I see as the logo gets larger the poop over the u get's larger as well. It might be more noticable over time. You might be able to fix that by screening back the bird, ever so slightly, to give the whole piece some depth... otherwise and regardless, well done.
- spendogg0
i like - i agree with gramme - the wing looks a bit unfinished - tighten up those curves and
bacon up that sausage
- era4O40
Thanks, guys. Wonderful suggestions. I honestly couldn't see these things because i'm way to close to the project.
And you're absolutely right about the USPS logo, so we're trying to make the eagle less encapsulated and use different forms/elements for the strokes.
I had to take the logo offline for a while, while the client negotiates a retainer. I'll pop it back up when I get approval with (hopefully) some revisions that include your feedback.
+1 everyone. Thanks!