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- leftwave
i'm working on some concepts for a small startup fitness training, massage and nutrition company. their philosophy revolves around health, balance and well being.
what do you think so far??
- oldelpaso0
i'd say keep sketching..
typographically... none (if pressed id choose the bottom right one)
as for the mark - whats going on with #1? stepping stones?
#2 lotus flowers?
#3 no chance!! looks like shes gonna get bummed ;)
(also by specifying a woman on the front u totally killed any potential male clientelle)
#4 the 'R' is making me cry, the mark could work but needs more work
#5 water cleaning center?
#6 probably the best one.. but needs a lot more work to look fluid and smooth.. at the moment it looks like contrived illustrator shaped as opposed to flowing shapesat the moment its all very generic, pretty shapes with no meaning.. keep digging into the USP or the philosophy
the stepping stones(?) thing is a nice analogy of "little steps to a better life" kinda thing.. but think about other ways of laying them out.. do they need ot be over eachother.. or in a row, in a circles, maybe instead of stones.. its actually footprints step-by-step style...
theres plenty of scope still..
i'd say did around a bit morealso..concentrate on the mark.. typography will then become obvious
- Complexfruit0
I prefer concept #1. I would keep exploring that and push it some more.
- ozhanlion0
like the last one in terms of approach. I think if you play with it more it can become something.
- swollenelbow0
i like # 6 green and grey, i could see that on stationary.
let us know which one they choose?
- silentseven0
Concept 3 rocks!
looks like the logo of this little rub N' tug, i mean massage an therapy shop I use to live by
- Ampersanderson0
i'm with oldelpaso. all the way.
- version30
i say work on
2a & 6a