Business Card Crit
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- neue75_bold0
you are of course, entitled to your own opinion...
even if it's wrong ;P
- Dancer0
I am NEVER wrong
ever
- hiatus0
I say number one except all white type except for the Illustrator text
- neue75_bold0
try changing your last name to Felcher, might garner more attention..
- ********0
nah, felchers are 10 a penny round these parts. old news.
- mybrokenshoe0
" it feels detached, resting on top of the art. your art has a definite tone and feel. perhaps your type should evoke something as well."
Yeah i see what you mean, if i get around to illustrationg type, i will incorporate into the image, but it has taken me forever to sort this version!
So Gill Sans is staying for now,
"Illustrator?
Illustration seems a little weird??"Yep your right it shopuld be illustrator!
Dancer you mentioned printing digitally, I currently use these peeps for 250:
http://www.afterdarkmedia.net/
Ideally i would prefer to get a shorter run and change the deesign more often...
would you reccomend a particular digital printer?
- neue75_bold0
I need to get out more I guess, instead of getting sucked into my damp hole...
- mybrokenshoe0
Righto thought the folks who helped me out might like to see with what i ended up with.
Is going to the printers shortly (at last!)
thanks again
- Soler0
I would suggest putting the return after your title - grouping your telephone, email, and website together. It would make more sense
- mybrokenshoe0
Cheers Soler, I was going for the this is who i am, then how to contact me... also looks too bunched up, what do the rest of the folks think?
- ********0
i vote number 2