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- JSK0
less dull? i think it looks great !
only think i could think of would be more texture around the blue
more abstract lines
also maybe since its very grid based, more grid lines bits around the over all structure
- morilla0
needs more tits
- JSK0
o and maybe more contract on the image. she seems very white.
you want more darker bits not tits on the blue area.
- morilla0
yeah, keep it clean. Looks fine as is. Maybe tweaking the colored headline , font size... But other than that, leave it.
- e_b_c0
the focal point is a blank blue area that fades to a woman's torso.
strikes me as an issue.
also, think about treating the photo/color overlay in a more organic way (maybe). what you've done is a very nice version of a very nice version and so on.
m2c
- level2b0
Why is there so much blue in the middle area? Is that part of the branding? It works for containing the content on the left - doesn't work so much over the girl on the right.
- JSK0
actually the color head lines in the lower portion seems like a great idea
morilla you are hired !
- skt0
Something isn't sitting right with the columns in the bottom half. The padding between the 1st and 2nd seems too tight compared to the far left margin.
I agree about the photo needing work, the arm bleeding into white looks odd.
I would move the tick to line up with the change in colour in the blue.
And I agree with the coloured headlines in the bottom half.
Looks nice though.
Now, anyone want to play flash developer so I can go home?
- johndiggity0
more interesting crop of the woman, or a different photo alltogether.
- ants0
Introduce a contrasting colour somewhere you would like a focus?
- sdenino0
I think it looks great, but if you're looking to make it more impactful, have you tried playing with the scale of your typography? It all is fairly close in size. Maybe move the tagline under Our Process into the blue area and pulling the opcaity down. Then you can really increase the point size of the tagline. Bump up the point size of your title also.
- Bottlerocket0
needs more tits
morilla
(Mar 1 07, 15:21)HA HAHA...
Man I needed a laugh this mornng. Thanks for that.
- tomkat0
big white type in the blue area
- Baskerville0
lol @ skt refering to the gutters between columns as 'padding'.
you can take the away from the web...
- emecks0
I say have the tart standing in front of the blue.
but what do I know.