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- johndiggity0
nice drawrings!
- gramme0
first thoughts...
gray intro type is hard to read. Needs to be lighter.
Your portfolio: web work should have screen caps for easier browsing. Making me visit another site to see the work is the lazy man's remedy.
My 2ยข.
- gramme0
So it looks like those links i mentioned are actually your links and not your web work.
That needs to be made clearer.
Your skills in AI have improved vastly. I like the flash window that pops up within the portfolio.
- maxB0
hahaha.
love it.
you're drawings are super c ool.
- edd-e0
thanks guys!!!
- spendogg0
I would love to see some of your accessory work.
Your robot stuff is shweet!
- OSFA0
very nice partner.
Did you watch the Price is Right???
- Point50
crit 1: love the illoz as always
crit 2: for some reason I just don't like the first page being blank, the rest of the site is filled with illoz, put some hot shit on the front too! And I saw the links on the right before I saw the links on top. If I wasn't familiar with most of the links on the right, I would have clicked those first.
- edd-e0
good Points1!
[pun intended]
- JerseyRaindog0
It's very slow to load on my browser edd-e. And when I click on a thumb it just opens as a separate page (this is FF2 on an intel Mac). Not sure if that's right...
- MichaelFelt0
It was really slow for me as well?
- JerseyRaindog0
Ah wait, now it seems to work. Like the little flash movie. Really like the blue and black as I've just done the same for another site.
Excellent illustrations as ever.
Nice.
- edd-e0
I would love to see some of your accessory work.
Your robot stuff is shweet!
spendogg
(Jan 30 07, 08:27)i really cant post my sketches as everything is not out yet.
in my previous work experience i was always an assistant or an associate designer and the credit went to someone else.
in the last 2 years its been all me, and all my stuff is due out this fall 07.
i can say i am launching for 2 major players in the urban mens market for this fall.
also i am showing my collections at MAGIC in FEB07 so meet me there.
thanks for the support everyone!!!!! your help is much appreciated!!!!!
:)
- canuck0
have something appear on that first page, instead of black.
if you're using the lightbox, maybe keep it consistant, I see that comics thumbs opens up in white window.
But I think you should just have the thumbs on left then a larger view to the right, instead of the long nav with a list of names.
And dude your illustrations are looking better then when I saw them long ago. Nice stuff e!
- k0na_an0k0
Hey man really nice! I like the layout and the functionality.
And big ups to you for posting my site link! It's funny cause in the new site I'm building for myself you're one of the guys I'm linking off mine too.
Yay!
- edd-e0
thanks kOna!!
if you didnt noticed i have been linking to your site from the frst site i had!!!
always loved the name of the site!!!
the work is great too!!
:)
- OSFA0
* jealous.
- edd-e0
if anyone wants me to link their site from mine ill add you just let me know. :)
- spendogg0
word e-pill. I cant wait to own some of your urban shizz.
hey k0na - whut up meat cakes?
- edd-e0
spencer-
do you use ichat?