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- ********0
What that needs a little stick man flailing through the air, wishing he had a ladder...
How do they clean top windows then?
- indian_pole0
like it, but will the lines on the 'c' work when reduced to really small?
- Dancer0
Doesn't remind me of a window cleanig company, I can not see any concept behind it. Whats the idea with the C
- Concrete0
How do they clean top windows then?
moth
(Jan 29 07, 05:35)Ha ha.
A 'revolutionary' telescopic pole pumped with filtered water.
- Concrete0
Whats the idea with the C
Dancer
(Jan 29 07, 05:45)Cascade; a series of shallow or steplike waterfalls, either natural or artificial.
I'v tried to link that with the C and also how the system works.
- chossy0
yikes :(
I dinae like it, sorry buddy. I'm actually not sure what to say to help this one out?.... perhaps try and develop the shape into a wave or something froathy christ knows, I mean jesus concrete what gives on this one you really have dropped the ball here you asshole you totall asshole I hate you so much.
- UndoUndo0
they clean the windows with that product where i live....i think the rain does a better job but that is more down to the operator than the product!
- phatlee0
Hmmn, not sure, typography needs a revisting. The logo may stuggle when reduced, how about using less lines, and make them wider? I thought the 'C' came from the movement of wiping a window? Dunno, like the colours though...
- ********0
I like it--the C, that is
- Concrete0
I'm sorry chossy. Do you think you can find it in yourself to forgive me?
*bows head, maunders out of thread
- doesnotexist0
i like the making the c more of a wave idea. that would be neat to see. some sort of three-dimensional wave.
right now the c says neon lights or...hot dogs. blue hot dogs.
- Nairn0
i like it - i'm seeing water, washing, circular wiping - e.v.e.r.y.t.h.i.n.g.
suddenly, the world of ladderless window cleaning seems like an exciting, dynamic industry with a bright future.
I would, however, agree with phatlee - you might want to try a couple of different stroke widths, as much for legibility as to see how simple you can make it whilst keeping the idea distinct and worthy.
chipper, mate. chipper.
- vespa0
ooh nice colours blue like a barnacle.
l like the differing lengths of the wipey c lines but as someone said not sure how it will work small.
gotta say all these funny curly fonts are giving me the heebies. not sure if the nannas would get it.
- blaw0
- Concrete0
Thanks Nairn. I didn't think it was that inscrutable. Can you help me clothes-line chossy? Ready - 1, 2 3...
- chossy0
Not this time concrete not this time.
- Nairn0
*messes up attempted- clothesline
*sits on chossy's face
- kidswift-0
Can't find it on the web but totally reminds me a london property company pf / property finder or something the p is in the same colours and steped with inner circles pretty much the same... is there another way you could play around with the idea of cascading water perhaps in a slightly more obvious way?
- ********0
I'll bet they're not paying for this much thought and attention.
The logo is fine. It's window cleaners for chrissake..