CRIT MY SITE PLEASE
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- exador10
nice launch page...
but the page shuts down the second i press the enter button..
i'm using firefox...will try it in explorer ...
- digilee0
not that font ... again!
not dark enough
not colourful enough
needs more 2.0
needs less 1.0
needs less 3.0get my drift?
- phatlee0
WHY CAPS?
WHY FULL PAGE?
ARRGGHH!!!
- Mishga0
same thing here...
only works on ie..
:/
- exador10
liked the hotel site you did...simple yet elegant...
the foresight logo treatment is nice too..still tho...that closing window shit is seriously annoying...i tend to only use firefox and it just shuts down your whole thing man...least it did for me....
anyhow, nice work dude...
- Baskerville0
Firstly, please don't resize my window. I know you want to show your work in the best possible light but it scares me when that happens.
Some really lovely work on there, but I think you know that already ;o)
in terms of the styling of the site I think it's a bit over the top and not particulalry orginal. It's very 'fashionable' but that will date very quickly if not already, so I suppose you're prepared to rework it every so often.
But as I said the work shows through and I'd like to see the work take centre stage, as at the moment it conflicts with the conspicuous use of fat type and rainbow colours.
nice to see some good work!
- Bottlerocket0
As a flasj interface its pretty well formed, but there are a few things that bug me, that needn't.
Such as...
The back buttoin,where the work dissappears when you roll over it.
Within work, the left-right scrolling doesn't seem to work, even though it does. Took me a while to work out I had to mvoe my mouse right over to the side. Its a nice interaction, but I would make it more obvious or simplify it more.
- scpgt0
same here..
is that the point(?) like it's some clever postmodern non-site website.. a critique on the fact that all portfolio sites look the same and are thus inconsequential and might as well not be there..?
or is it just fucked?
- exador10
Baskerville sums up my feelings exactly here..
(nicely worded dude)i like your work, but feel the site in some ways kinda gets in the way of it...
still and all though, nice work man...
cheers
ex
- scpgt0
('same here' re: the fact that it closes. have no explorer. cant see it.)
- Bottlerocket0
I agree with baskervilles style comments. The thing that is lacking for me is a clear message about the site, that is above the work.
- ross0
a lot of the work isnt showing up for me. IE.
- Bottlerocket0
I am using safari, and it works pretty well for me. testing seems needed for other platforms
- Concrete0
No worky in firefox.
Fine in IE7.Nice work.
- Witt0
i like the story-telling structure, but the story itself is too miami for me.
- johndiggity0
i must have missed the memo that proclaimed rainbows are no longer gay territory.
- deletedscene0
i got it werkin on my firefox. is it cos it is a pop up??
oh maaan!! still got some werk to do by the sounds of it.
thanks for all the critisism ya'll. much appreciated.
- deletedscene0
i must have missed the memo that proclaimed rainbows are no longer gay territory.
who says i aint!!!
- Bottlerocket0
some guy with a handlebar moustache going by the name of 'Butch'
- deletedscene0
some guy with a handlebar moustache going by the name of 'Butch'
shit u know me!!!