Logo Crit - All Right!
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- _salisae_0
original table 10 comedy
- swollenelbow0
hee, which ones, there is three options missy?
- gramme0
original table 10
mayhap some minor kerning issues
i'd lose the stroke behind if possible, or make it as light as possible
- gramme0
no distress
it doesn't seem to support the concept.
- swollenelbow0
you guys are scrollin down? what's about the village lanterns ones?
- OSFA0
they're all nice. Agree with salisae. Table10 original.
- e_b_c0
second. but i would redraw the letters so they similar a weight.
- swollenelbow0
thanks for the responses guys.
i'm having trouble figuring out which you guys are talking about haha...maybe i should have labeled them better.
you are talking about the one with the ink splash right ebc?
- johndiggity0
maybe you should number them?
- swollenelbow0
yeah...that makes sense now diggity.
things that make you go hmm....
- Terminal270
I like the first one too (table 10), but the kerning needs work.
Try making the table 10 smaller and the comedy bigger to fill the gaps.
C
- mr_snuggles0
they all make me laugh, well done...
- swollenelbow0
terminal, thanks i like that one too...i've always liked perspective kinda logos.
i'll try that. i'm going to review these with the client today and see which one he likes.
they are still undecided about the name of the comedy room, which is why there are 2 names to choose from.
so, terminal got it right, A, B, C hah
- swollenelbow0
haha super snuggles!
- spookDD0
#2 Table 10, but needs a conscious effort with lineweight, lots of disconnect.
I'm not sure what Lantern thing is. Try to push some different directions other than textures on logos. That can be done in later rounds unless for some reason it's extremely necessary. It should be strong without for all applications. My .02.
- swollenelbow0
hmm, spook, you have a point there...unfortunately the client has spoken.
http://www.modernsituations.com/…
here's round 2...
- wendog0
standard hourly rate for web site maintenence on a small business? Thanks dudes and gals!
- wendog0
whoops! meant that as a post...nice logos btw