Stationery Crit
- Started
- Last post
- 21 Responses
- chossy0
I like them both concrete, however the text on the top portion of the right hand paper seems wrong to me..... would there be something you could do where you put the text in a curve.... or would that make it look like sheeeeeeeeeisse?.
- elms0
I like them both concrete, however the text on the top portion of the right hand paper seems wrong to me..... would there be something you could do where you put the text in a curve.... or would that make it look like sheeeeeeeeeisse?.
chossy
(Dec 6 06, 06:03)thats two sides of one A4 yes?
- Concrete0
It the front and back of a letter head.
Thanks chossy, I'll see how that looks. T'is a bit lost where it is.
- Dancer0
logo is too big on the left, also needs buging up as this is where the "to" address goes (normally). If you can risk it put it at the bottom on the right.
You gonna get some serious show through on that from the reverse. Having said that it could like nice with it.
Nice.
- elms0
looks nice
what type of paper will you use? maybe the color will be too visible on the other side?
- OSFA0
agree, might wanna check on the paper and back color. left (front) looks very nice.
- abba_cadaver0
I think it's looking good, I just question the size and placement of the logo and nitpicky things like why not do the text in purple or pink to save a bit in cost, or add a little color to the text (the T or the F)
don't worry about show through on the paper find the right paper and you have nothing to worry about.
- Nairn0
Looks lovely, man - really, very professional, like. Though, I'm not sure about the inner-dropshadow thing - or is that a die cut?
However, looks aside - the leftside sheet - a compslip? If so, how will client react to expensive print, bulkier item? Compslips are about 3 to an a4 sheet, right? and usually you have space to scribble a 'thankyou' or whatever on.
Looks expensive - how flush is your client?
x
- Dancer0
how about make use of the show through and place the logo on the reverse in the top right but flipped so you see a ghostly image of the logo on the top?
- Concrete0
thanks guys.
The stock has to be laserable so probably something uncoated and about 110gsm.
Waiting to hear from printers about how it will take.
- elms0
and nice draft also
- Nairn0
damn i missed your previous 'front/back' comment. in that case - looks good..but expensive.
I take it the purple shows through the die cut when folded? sweet touch.
How hardy is the central bar of the diecut - might it be easily rippable?
- Dancer0
you can certainly go upto 130gsm. received a nice LH the other day on James McNaughton Skye Uncaoted.
- Dancer0
... if you don't want a show through
- Concrete0
or is that a die cut?
Yes.
And, Nairn, this is the front and back of some headed paper.
Not a client, company I work for on freelance basis. (feels like full time)Thanks for all your comments so far, guys. I will be taking some suggestions on board.
- Nairn0
hey dancer - how's your girlfriend?
x
- Concrete0
How hardy is the central bar of the diecut - might it be easily rippable?
Nairn
(Dec 6 06, 06:28)Slightly concerned about that. But the client is happy.
Good to know Dancer, thanks.
- arejay0
I like your stationery,
real crisp coloring, but also belief
that the logotype is a bit big and if they use envelopes with a window you could be in trouble with the address information. I'm real interested to see the rest of the housestyle. good luck
- Dancer0
Nairn,
She's all good thanks, just pining after my slong...
;)
D!!