Site critique
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- cls
Critcs please
Redesigning a website for a dutch carlease company. Trying to avoid the web 2.0 a bit. But not quiet satisfied myself.
Please point out the bads and the goods.http://www.clearsite.nl/cs/tb/tl…
And if anyone can tell me how to actually make the link link, they are more then welcome.
- cls0
it links so never mind the link thing.
- mr_snuggles0
echte waar...
- 23kon0
"Trying to avoid the web 2.0"
so why does it scream "web 2" then?
not saying its a bad thing ...
- Timson0
couldn't help but reminding me of woedend.nl. but thats probably just the colorscheme. my fault.
- cls0
scream web 2.0.
I did not used the logo reflecting.Anybody else some critics i could use?
- 23kon0
scream web 2.0.
I did not used the logo reflecting.Anybody else some critics i could use?
cls
(Nov 6 06, 06:21)
-----the "Routeplanner" bit is reflected! :P
- cls0
fook yeah, you are right.
Cheers
- johndiggity0
drop the 45º lines and go for a solid, darker gray to give it some contrast.
- cls0
Better now?
Still dont know, guess i have to lay it aside for a day and come back with a fresh mind.
- johndiggity0
i like that better, but might have to tweak the gray boxes on the left of the nav so they don't fade into the bg.
- cls0
thanks johndigity
Gonna try that.
- e_b_c0
it's very impersonal. i'm not entirely sure what a 'car lease' company does. is it a short term (just a few days) rental or more of a long-term dealership?
- cls0
Defintely long term, but very corporate. Only leasing out to companies.
So the site has have a bit of a corporate feel.But will have a go to make it a bit more personal.
- boxcar90
love the overall design. the header looks great as does the navigation bar on left, and the news section on the right.
however, the big orange bar on top stands out a little too much. try messing with those four boxes at the top. change their design&color and/or move them around. i'd like to see how they look in the middle section (either above or below the content)
- cls0
Thanx boxcar9, will give it a try and come back here.
- cls0
Tried to mix the orange bar more in to the site.
Is this better or is it worse?